I heard Kay Ryan refer to her own poems as "snack poems." That's how I felt about really short poems, i.e., a snack but not a meal.
Then I found that from time to time I came across a short poem that knocked my socks off. I started collecting them like shells. Some of them called to me late at night.
I found myself trying my hand at a few shorties. I distrusted them and put them away. Too short to get a major role in a journal.
Then several months ago I was asked to submit some work to a nice online journal. I noticed that the poems in that journal tended to be short, so I dug out some of my little ones and sent them off. Two grabbed right up! I submitted a few of my formal ones to another journal. Two more snatched up. Had I been unfair to my own poems?
Then Kay Ryan was appointed Poet Laureate. Snacks can be very satisfying. Snacks can stimulate the appetite. Snacks can stave off hunger.
Before I ruin my appetite with any more of these metaphors, I want to offer you two short poems by Lola Haskins, both of them perfect gems, I think, and both from her book Desire Lines: New and Selected Poems.
She tries it on, like a dress.
She decides it doesn't fit
and starts to take it off.
Her skin comes, too.
Here's another short one by Haskins:
Think small, the way ants
build their hills, a grain
at a time. If I could be
one cell in you, how ardently
I'd multiply. Until I was a hundred,
a million cells. Until I filled
so much of your X-rayed self
that if they cut me out,
you could not survive.
I've become a fan of short poems over the last year and have been striving to "write shorter."
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ReplyDeleteI love the metaphor of a snack poem versus a meal. Not only because I enjoy the short poem, but also… when I am really intensely in a writing phase, where I deprive myself of sleep and outdoor interaction, I find I eat snack sized meals rather than full fork-and-knife dinners. I find there’s something about the snack that is both nourishing and satisfying, whether culinary or poetic.
I’m definitely going to check out Haskins’ collection. You’ve done such a wonderful job of teasing us with your praise of it.
Best,
Lori A. May
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Good morning Diane,
ReplyDeleteLoved this article -since I am always a full pager--but you gave me food for thought. I write like a talk--as you've probably noticed but I suspect you'll soon see a new me on the page...excuse me--half a page at least!
Grateful Gloria
Diane, I came here from She Writes, and I love this "snack poem" idea! I find myself most often writing shorter poems, and it's nice to have a new way to think about them.
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